Opening post by Demi Lune
Mar 30th - 07:01
Not to nitpick, but how about "Slither Chimera slithers off into the distance, falling apart as it goes." instead of "Slither Chimera slithers off into the distance, losing pieces as it moves."? It's fine the way it is, but personally I think it sounds a bit better.
But when that call never comes, it's time to face what you've become - there's no point doing all of this, unless you know you're having fun.